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I am a young stallion, born into a sacred forest. I was born pure blood guardian, meaning my duty when the elder dies is to take on his responsibility to be able to protect the forest. You see, my homeland, known as the Forbidden forest is divided into 4 smaller areas, all which are all protected by individual guardians. The north side is protected by a stag, Toru,  whom is pretty new to the job as far as I am aware. He is a tracking trainer, able to pick up the slightest mark in the earth. The east side is protected by a bear, Urs, one whom is also know as our hunting trainer. The south side is protected by a wolf, Tenris, pure as anything amongst the forest. He is busy training an army for an upcoming war. This war is not decided fully yet, but the precautions must be taken. Then, there is the western elder, my grandfather, Alexander. He is a bay mustang, his trait going back a long way.  My mother and father were also bay, though I was born pure black, with a single white star on my head. This colour was a shock to all the forestry for black was meant to be a bad omen. But, my mother told me on a stormy night that her mother was a black mustang. This gave me little relief. Shouldn’t I be a bay too? Shouldn't I have the same qualities as my parents? As I grew though, my colour coat begin to fade from my mind, it didn’t matter after all. I dreamed of becoming one of the soldiers in the war and wanted only to please the armies leader with my speed and agility. Though this still wasn’t possible for I was still of a very young age. This frustrated me, for I had what it took to be a soldier. I was able to carry a weapon and use it whilst in full run. I was able to block and attack swiftly, barely leaving a mark upon my body. I could run comfortably in armour. But Tenris shakes his head and tells me to come back when I am age enough. I sit around, kicking dirt and eating to make up time, maybe fighting another stallion if I am lucky. When a storm blew over the plains, urging a fight within, I could not resist a thought to creep in and move me.

I am a young, black war stallion, the greatest warrior that has ever hit history and this is my story. Follow me and I will lead you through the darkest of my journeys, through the laughters I shared, the friendships I have created and the challenges that made me who I am today. Climb aboard and hang on tight, for this ride will be the wildest of any dream.
start of another story - editedby my editor :iconhamato-ninja:
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:iconpsychotikraptor:
Wow, this is a promising start to what seems to be a story full of brilliant potential. :aww: Nice job, Eagless! I'll be sure to follow this story closely. :D I  always enjoy fables (stories with animals), and this already appeals to me. =P Please keep up the nice work! I'm interested to see what happens next with the stallion. ^^
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White-Eagless Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist

wow, thanks Azure *grins*

I cant wait to show you what HAPPENS to the stallion. I have made 2 or 3 big twists to the story :la: I cant wait to write it

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You're most welcome, Eagless. ^^ I really look forward to reading the next chapter. :D Please keep it up, okay? :)
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White-Eagless Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
of course ^^ if I have some serious interest n it, it helps me want to continue writing it ^^ I actually thought it sounded lame :XD:
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Lame? I think it is very good. :)
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White-Eagless Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
well, I am glad someone does. oh, can you be an editor for me?
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White-Eagless Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist

can you note me your email address and I email it to you when chapters are done?

you also will be referenced as my editor too ^^ Thanks a lot *hugs you*

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AlexiaG94 Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks very interesting!
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White-Eagless Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks
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